tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16608180.post3402302122430225470..comments2023-04-10T14:29:56.153+01:00Comments on Raw Light: poetry & opinion since 2005: Fixing 'Failed' Poems: ideas and complicationsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16608180.post-19163002571277955372007-08-24T00:10:00.000+01:002007-08-24T00:10:00.000+01:00Thanks, Sorlil. I would have also shared the poems...Thanks, Sorlil. I would have also shared the poems in question, both pre-make-over and post. But I couldn't have entered them in the competition if I'd done that!<BR/><BR/>Maybe if one of them wins, I'll feel able to. If none of them win, of course, they'll be going out to other competitions and magazines. The endless round ...<BR/><BR/>JxJane Hollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15590668593487445482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16608180.post-23310934548909669652007-08-23T22:47:00.000+01:002007-08-23T22:47:00.000+01:00This is great. Plenty of points to think about her...This is great. Plenty of points to think about here especially concerning ending poems and purging much-loved but ultimately non-working lines. Thanks for sharing your reworking process.Marion McCreadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04657757253873577465noreply@blogger.com